Fandom Comments On Mary Sue Rants

These are comments on the critique/review blog that skewered several creepy pasta Mary Sue characters.

The second entry got a massive amount of negative comments from people who were incensed at the harsh reviews, going as far as to call it a "hate blog" and accusing the bloggers of wanting to ruin people's lives and cause them to kill themselves.

Those commenters are forgetting that the bloggers in this case are merely writing what they want on their own blog. If their mission was truly to make people feel rotten and bully them into some kind of submission, they would not be sticking to writing on their own blog. They would be plastering their reviews/critiques and flames all over the sites belonging to those whose characters they were ranting about. They are not doing that, and no one made the authors of these Mary Sues go to their blog.

The Mary Sue authors and their supporters should have been around during the Senna Maxwell Gundam Wing Mary Sue hate campaign. That was a true hate campaign. Senna went out of her way to get attention and bully another Mary Sue writer right off the net for giggles and kicks. She didn't just make a blog disparaging other characters. She followed her target around message boards, guestbooks, mailing lists, stalking and harassing her with personal attacks as well as flames about her Mary Sue character. That's hate.

Simply saying unfavourable things on ones own blog about any fictional character is not hate, it is freedom of expression.

Something everybody does is hold the subgenera of horror known as creepy pasta up as something like sacred. They all go on about whether or not some character is worthy of being classified as a creepy pasta, as if that is some sort of honour.

It is not.

Creepy pasta is not sacred by a long shot due to where it originated and because of its viral nature. 4chan chain letters AKA memes with a horror bent, basically. Even the notorious Teddy chain letter is a creepy pasta says David Emery's urban legend site.

So if it's a Mary Sue, it isn't unworthy to be a creepy pasta, it belongs there.

Now, to the comments. Edited for language.


Comments on part 1

Originally found here.

AnonymousOctober 1, 2013 at 5:15 PM

*waiting anxiously for next post, spammingly refreshing the website* too... Addictive....

AnonymousOctober 2, 2013 at 3:37 PM

When is the next post?

AnonymousNovember 24, 2013 at 12:19 AM

The character Envy was made in a dress-up zombie game.

And then she says not to use her without permission... ¬¬

AnonymousJanuary 24, 2014 at 12:14 AM

Glad someone else caught it!

AnonymousJune 12, 2014 at 9:16 AM

Critique for a critic:

Nice rant, I'm impressed of the levels of mediocrity this one reaches

And don't get me wrong, I understand your frustration, but filling this review with garbage like insults and jokes just makes it pathetic. However, I think it's still nice, of course if a rabid circus monkey was the one who wrote it....

Now, I might had published this comment using my Google account, but sadly it seems that I can't even trust the circus's owner here. Oh wait, this is not a circus? My bad, I thought that any place where people try to make you laugh trough any way possible can be called a circus...

By the way, if this message has some grammatical mistakes, please understand that my native language is spanish and my english is a little bit rusty by now. ¿Or do you also want me to write the critique in spanish, you brute?

AnonymousOctober 6, 2014 at 12:12 PM


AnonymousJune 12, 2014 at 10:17 PM

Mariah’s Rant: Part A.

I completely understand how it is to be a critical person, especially on artwork and works of literature. Everyone's a critic no matter how they try to look at it. We all still, and forever will, judge they way that other people dress, the way they portray their personalities, how they speak, work, write, draw, sing, etc. It is completely normal. Yet, what I don't agree with is fully expressing all of our opinions out loud or even in writing. So since you seem to have a regular habit at this, then I came up with the idea to point out some of the few mistakes you make very clear right away.

When I first was shown your blog account, the first thing that I saw was the title. "Why Fags" Seriously? Do you actually understand the actually meaning to the word "fag"? Also it really has no meaning behind it, unless you have something against a cigarette butt. If you are trying to call a group of general people “fags” then maybe you should get off your butt and actually do something with your own life. Then maybe you will learn that the title is vague and pretty pathetic in my own opinion. Also, your copyright is "The Secret Walrus Club". I must admit very unique. Though, in all reality, you are all showing how immature each of you four young, or older, men have. Also to add on to that, the fact that you do not give artists the gratitude of taking something down is ridiculous. If you have an issue with someones artwork then go to the website they are using, and then you should comment what you actually believe is wrong with the artwork. At least that is what people who are real critics do.

Critics are there to not only say a bunch of crap about people (Which by the way, is really not a real critic.) but still they should let known to the artist of what issues they have with the piece of work as well as the writing and background to come along with it. A real critic doesn’t bash on every little thing that they believe is wrong in a piece of work. Instead, they comment on a few things that really need some fixing. I hope you realize that the age of some teenagers or adults affect the way they draw and grow. Obviously it doesn’t seem that you all are taking that into consideration. Instead, you are demolishing down bits by bits all at once. Every artist. I seriously mean every real artist, is emotional. The large variety of emotions are shown by the amount of imagination and the tone or portrayal of an image. Neither one of you take those simple facts into consideration. You just ramble on about what you believe is wrong. Well then, try to take their artwork and do it better trying to use the mind of the age they were. Try to be that person. Be in their own shoes. Experience what they experience in life. Instead of sitting behind your computer typing this bullcrap up with one hand and then fapping with the other to keep your own pathetic critical strain of thought.

MachJune 13, 2014 at 10:50 AM

I'm not usually prone to replying to these comments, but I just wanted to agree the Whyfags is a horrible name, and I've been trying to think of a good way to rename the blog for ages. It was a originally a play on the title of Mez, Kenny, and Justin's LP channel "Waifu Productions," with the name of the blog being "Whyfags Productions."

I regret the name and the homophobic implications it has, but at the same time I'm not one to shy away from using inflammatory language just because it risks offending thin-skinned idiots too wrapped up in their own sense of self-righteousness.

AnonymousJune 12, 2014 at 10:19 PM

Mariah’s Rant: Part C

You are using some decent criticism here, but also, you are going way too far on personalities and appearances. Think about ages, the type of people, where they are located nationality wise, and about the amount of bias comments you really use. The four of you clearly take things too far, and neither of you want to admit to the amount of boring and pathetic work you put in just to put others down and brings yourself up. You pretty much admitted on your About/FAQ that you each do not exactly live life. Well Just because you sit behind a computer screen and say everything you hate about someones work, it doesn’t mean it is a healthy hobby. The way the four of you type up your issues and don’t directly try to fix them is lazy, annoying, and in all honesty you are acting sort of like a bunch of prats. Oh no, yeah I was just vague right there. I am trying to not use cuss words so i can be as polite as I possibly could right now. How about you learn what constructive criticism is. Actually use it like real artists and writers do. It is fine to rate someone. That is clearly normal. Yet basically saying “Oh the way they drew that or the way they wrote that out is dumb hahaha” yeah… just don’t even try to put yourself out anymore. I am serious, learn a little bit. Maybe you will realize what you should actually do from this comment instead of being little wussies that are afraid of reactions from artists that get their work unprofessionally criticized.

I, myself, am an artist. I am seventeen years old. My name is Mariah. I tend to draw still life, portraits. I paint portraits, emotional states of a person and portray them to the way they are felt, anime characters, human features that I find beautiful, etc. I love to take pictures of nature with my FujiFilm camera. Also I write about fantasy, romance, and horror. The most important part about me is that I like to stick up for others especially those being attacked without even knowing about what was going on beforehand. I am here to stick up for fellow artist and kind hearted people. I understand the emotional wreck some can go through when their artwork and themselves as a person are attacked. As I can see, some of the reviews on here are down with a bit of constructive criticism, but the rest, no it isn’t. I wish to ask of you to realize that you are really not creating anything special. It is just a large group of hate posts made by boys who believe they are some sort of group of special critiques. Go learn a few things before you actually to to make people feel down. People grow, they get better, actually keep researching on their upcoming projects and how they came with idea’s of things before you just try to things of everything wrong on spot. I’d like to see you all try to live the lives of these talented artists. To not sit on your butt behind the screen and hide with your little unicorns in the background. Just grow up and stop being immature little boys. Grow up and be men.

Rant over. Have a nice day.

AnonymousJune 12, 2014 at 10:22 PM

Mariah’s Rant: Part B

Since My Part B is not showing to me right now I shall repost...

I’ve read through your blogs, your contact information, your “36 Things Not To Do” .Which if I do say so myself, I laughed for a few of the things you say not to do. 1) You know a few young artists start out with bases, and they eventually grow out of that. A base is there to give a young mind an idea of what they can create with a character and what angle’s to use and where to put clothing, bangs, eyes, etc. 2) Accessorizing. Okay, I laughed very hard at this one. Many decent video games and animes use a wide variety of accessories. A few examples of video games: Kingdom Hearts, The Legend of Dragoon, Pokemon, Magna Carta, Tales games, Persona, and of course Final Fantasy as well. For a few anime examples: Date A Live, Black Butler, Sword Art Online, Fullmetal Alchemist, Soul Eater, Fairy Tail, Mirai Nikki. These of course had the plot to go with them. They each had meanings to go along with the sort of accessories that characters wore. A good character shows their personality not only by how they speak but also of how their appearance is portrayed. 3) Overcompensating. Well this one I agreed with but also I disagreed. A character can carry more than what they can physically handle as long as they also have the correct amount of adrenaline. A good anime that can be an example for this would be Sword Art Online. Kirito was able to carry more than what he could have handled even inside the game. Outside the game, he realizes how weak he truly is. If I remember correctly, Eleven Eyes also would be a good example. Go watch another anime, I promise it is actually decent. All in all, I believe that a few things you typed down were pretty true. Such as 1) Giving a character a theme song is absurd 2) The Ultimate-Life Form 3) Also, the short uninteresting battles. These are all things that some people use in their writing and creations of art. Well in all reality, it is normal. It develops people to become better writers and artists as they realize their mistakes and grow more. Anyways, back to your contact information.

Your contact information is quite clear. Though, I do not believe that violating others artworks and sharing them on a site that they did not post on is fair use. It may be legal for you to actually use, but think about the amount of possibilities of drama it will cause even more by moving someones work to a hate blog where they can’t control what is said and how to make it all end. It is not only embarrassing but demolishing to the artist’s hard work and motivation to carry on. What you should truly do is once again, comment on their artwork directly. Making this blog to just… well here is where I type and quote your silliness, “...we don't tell the artists about what we're doing, because the last thing we need is drama.” Not only myself, but my friends as well, laughed our butt’s off at this reply to one of your stated questions. Well if what you do not want is drama then maybe you shouldn’t post your judgements about other’s work. There is no point to you posting what-so-ever on blogspot. You should be posting on the artists work directly or messaging them. Yet instead, you are all be a group of cowards who are trying to avoid the fact that you may be taking your judgements a bit too far.

MachJune 13, 2014 at 10:56 AM

Note to anyone intending to post an overlong rant like Mariah's: If you're going to essentially make the same "get a life," "grow up," and "you're so mean" comments in your rant and flower it up with a poorly-written failed attempt at intelligent discussion, please just simplify it down to petty name-calling for the sake of my time.

AnonymousJune 13, 2014 at 8:16 PM

Well I am glad to see that you not being reliant on the title. Also very glad that you all are not trying to use it in a wrong way. I understand that making a few comments here and there that hurt peoples feelings is normal if they take it to heart. It could get irritating I admit.

Not once was I trying to make this an intelligent discussion. If I really wished for that, then I would've taken more time on my post. I mostly just wanted to get what I believed a crossed. In no way did I expect any of the host's of this blog to agree with me at all, nor did I expect to agree with much of what you all think is right and wrong. I especially did not think that either one of you would've commented, but I am glad I checked. To see that you took the time to actually reply is a helpful. I just am here to stick up not only for my friends, but also for fellow artists. I believe we both are able to state our opinion. I just am glad that you took the time to read my three-sectioned paragraph. You may have felt like you have wasted time. Yet, that is what you should prepare for when you host a blog. So thank you very much for replying to my comments. I just hope you took some more of what I said into consideration and to thought. I know you probably laughed at most of it. I still made it clear what myself and probably other's also have thought. Have a good day.


AnonymousMarch 2, 2015 at 6:01 PM

People say you are blunt with these criticisms but I understand why and I agreed with everything you said. These stories or characters aren't even creepyPasta worthy. More like Trollpasta. And even then I've seen better troll pastas.

UnknownNovember 7, 2015 at 10:49 PM

*spamming refresh* get the he|| on with it!


Comments on part 2

Originally found here.

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 2:11 PM

why, do you do this to people? do you enjoy hurting others? so creativity is flawed now is it? i'm sure the anime was used because the artist isn't really good at realism..and i know her, i don't think you all care about others, i wouldn't be surprised if someone took their life because of your hurtful comments. I see you're all men, do you not have wives? girlfriends? I bet you do this for your enjoyment to hurt people, no wonder a woman wouldn't love you. Why not, you know, get a job, or even a life?

AnonymousDecember 27, 2013 at 11:21 AM

They are not hurting people. They criticize the poor work. There is no creativity in those, this is just a bunch or stupid ideas put together. Most of these are 'Creepypasta' ( What a joke... ) OC's are friends with more famous Creepypastas, like Slenderman. People, Slenderman has NO blasted FRIENDS! HE'S NOT A JOCK-TYPE HIGH SCHOOL GUY!

You people need to stop being butthurt and White Knighting over everybody, because, in all honesty, these OC's definitely should be criticized for the sheer stupidity of them.

~ KiBoy

AnonymousSeptember 24, 2015 at 1:03 AM

People like you need to learn that things like this are bad. "Oh no I might hurt their feelings. I better placate them, and say it's the best thing ever! 10/10!!! <3<3<3" That's not the way things work, or at least it shouldn't. I myself have written What would probably qualify as crappypasta. (Like all of this.) And I never once got a cross comment. And I wish I had, so I could've learned from my mistakes. If you act "nice" and never give someone criticism, then they will never learn, and they will always make horrible pieces of garbage like these.

And you my friend are being the only hurtful one here. Going off on people because they share their opinions. You should think before you post. Did you possibly think that maybe you hurt someone's feelings? Maybe one of these guys who worked hard on this read your comment, and killed themselves? Does that make you any better? Does it make you feel good to talk down on people? I bet so. Again, think, before you post.

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 2:19 PM

the point of making CP OCs it to have fun and unleash your murderous side onto paper not into real life. or at least thats how i look at it. i personally like these designs and its kinda messed up of you to make a page just to bash them.i would /love/ to see you try to make a CP OC without copying cannon CPs or copying other peoples work. trust me when i say its hard as hell to do. and then to have flare asses such as yourself bash them after who knows how long it took for us to come up with the design story drawing uploading and other time consuming if not abit fun work that it took to make it online. bravo for being a interned dweeb.

AnonymousAugust 3, 2014 at 3:21 PM

Creepypastas are internet horror stories, not stories about your murderous side.

As you may or may not have noticed on the creepypasta wiki is that they do require qulaity, if you do not have at least minimum standard the creepypasta will be taken down unless the creepypasta is posted in a different site than the creepypasta wiki itself, but I have to say that a lot of these creepypasta OCs where interesting but they do not belong among the other creepypastas.

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 2:23 PM

It says anon, but i clearly don't give a flare; you'll figure out who this is.. What is your problem?! Okay, i'm not so flaring great at realism, get the flare over it! Stepping on my artistic talent or at least what I have or can do. You obviously want to get under our skins and bother the flare out of us, don't you? Don't care what kind of mental issues we have BEFORE you bash us (because you know, people have problems such as depression, then which dirt bags like you seem to trigger it more) and constantly by the way at me! this is unfair, now I personally feel like everything I do is now crap because of you, flaring men, you are all the same, flaring stupid, arseholes. GET A WOMAN OR BETTER YET A hamgOD DeMN LIFE!! I apparently can't do anything according to you all, how old are you all anyway? 30-40? dear Hamgod. You're calling me stupid and idiotic? You really have no compassion for humans do you? What a world we live in today, go hex yourselves.

AnonymousAugust 13, 2014 at 2:29 PM

Mmmmhmmm. I understand that people go through different phases and fads in life, but crud man, just don't get offended when people critique your work. They are sort of arseholes, but that's like the entire point of this blog. You just need to get a thicker skin, and maybe take some of their advice, change the crap they point out as stupid. Or you could just ignore all of that and make an OC that murders meanies that insult your artwork. That could work too.

Reality LoserAugust 28, 2014 at 4:52 AM

Are you flaring kidding me? I don't even know where to begin with your petty, irrelevant, immature and rather stupid comment. I forgot to mention as well; hypocritical. You're being such a hypocrite, it's not even amusing, it's just sort of sad and mildly irritating. Listen to me right now, din javel; I focus a lot on mental health. I've done a lot of things on mental disorders, and I wouldn't be afraid to confidently say I know my stuff, especially with the more common disorders, such as depression. Wake up you butt, but unless you're a whiny little crap who is so sensitive then you're clearly screwed when you actually start going out into the world, things like this DO NOT trigger depression! Oh, oh. Unless you mean that over-exaggerated, over-dramatic depression, where it isn't even /clinical depression/, but instead some teenager's lovely way to get attention, or a temporary feeling of sadness.

If you feel like everything you do is crap because of this, then honey you honestly need to start toughening up, because real life is going to throw a lot more criticism in your face.

Next, and oh my, this is where I really have to laugh because you're being offensive, hypocritical /and/ sexist, all at the same time!

Do not stereotype men. Do not throw around the male stigma like a flaring bar of chocolate, because you're making this 'world we live in' (oh wow, pfft, another petty whine) exactly how it is currently. If you're going to complain about things like this, don't pull the hypocrite card, because then everybody thinks you're a plainly stupid, immature idiot.

And stop over-exaggerating. Just get on with your life, they're strangers on the demn Internet, you could have easily ignored this.

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 2:38 PM

ok WTF man! ya it's fine being piticked at bad CP but why the F are you taking the puke out of peoples CP OC? people work long and hard to make good OCs, like the ones above and you are just slagging them off! I wanna see you do better, oh wait, why should i since you don't give a flare, why should i!

Blast you, i love throughs OC, and you know what! nothing is going to change that

emthesmallNovember 19, 2013 at 2:47 PM

emthesmall from DA, a proud OC owner

AnonymousDecember 27, 2013 at 11:28 AM

Exactly. People take time to make good OC's and none of the above can be even considered decent. Besides, there is nothing flaring creepy about a guy who has a telescope instead of his eye! I'd rather feel pity than be scared of him.

~ KiBoy

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 2:39 PM

What are you even doing? Doing this kind of things, making a page were you insult and criticque badly and not in a constructive way, insulting also the owners of the characters, you show yourselves as weak. Weak people, that are jealous of other one's ocs I think, since, if you're insulting them means that you're actually angry because some other people did a better job than you. People make ocs for the fun of it, not for make them become real people or crap like that.

Anyway, you're insulting famous people, and it's normal that jelly people like you insult famous people.

Another thing.

You're making yourselves ridicoulous c:

AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 2:17 AM

Yes, we're jealous of badly made OCs. Obviously.

Hear that guys? We're JELUZ.

AnonymousDecember 27, 2013 at 11:29 AM

I'm too busy laughing at all those butthurt comments to be jealous.

~ KiBoy

AnonymousAugust 3, 2014 at 11:24 PM

Butthurt comments? You kidding me? I saw you "ki-boy" going down the comments. Did you like sit here and crap on everyone who didn't exactly agree on the post? Is that what you did? (blasphemy deleted) eat a salad will you.

Sure, OCs like these (except for Sadie she's fine with me) need work, but that's no reason to do a hate page. That's what I don't get is hate pages; keep it to yourself, will ya arsehole? The creator could read and be absolutely hurt that you are crapping on their characters, that they've taken the time to make. Trust me, I'm in the middle of CP OC work and; it's freaking hard. You're constantly trying to get the image you want, trying to perfect them. You try it, and then get back to me on that. Not gonna? Then shut your mouth. You can't talk crap unless you've tried yourself. It's just not a fair game.

OCs are matter of just letting the imagination flow, and trying to make something everyone likes. Yes; some people are not gonna like it. Oh well. That's their opinion. Just don't BLOW UP YOUR HATE LIKE THIS hamgOD DAMMIT. It will tick other people off, and then other people get ticked with them, and then next thing you know, everyone's ticked. It's just not a good thing, you know? Try happiness, letting things be for once, to people who support hate pages.> :(

And further more, it seems that 3 out of 5 of the selected OCs are by the same creator. A theme going on, eh? Just...why? It's just borderline not nice! And by saying the creator, you are basically saying "This person made a horrible OC. It sux and here's an essay on why I hate it"

Da fic dude?

Just everyone take note of this, and for those who just do hate posts: get a job, get a lover, get a life do SOMETHING to make yourselves a little more of a positive person. Make an OC for all I care! OCs are for fun anyways, not for offical and professional reasons!

Deal with it Bud(

Gooday to everyone

~ That Person Who Was Getting Real Tired Of This crap And Said Something About It

AnonymousAugust 3, 2014 at 11:30 PM

Oh and also you meet up with the creatures and I dare you to NOT tell me that if you were to meet up with, you wouldn't crap your pants.

~That Person Who Was Getting Real Tired Of This crap And Said Something About It

ChipsSeptember 13, 2015 at 8:03 PM

What does having a relationship or not have to do with anything? It doesn't effect other peoples terrible writing skills! I am however alright with Sadie the only problem with her is the inconsistency of the story to the charictors appearance but still the fact that she dragged out the suicide scene THAT far just made the entire story just...what's the word, dry? Idk

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 2:53 PM

Gee I wonder where your amazing creepypasta oc is since you seem to have a clear definition of what a good CP OC is! (Sarcasm)

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 9:31 AM

Gee, obviously to know how to make a character good means you have to make at least one too! (Sarcasm)

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 12:41 PM

Gee, I wonder where that perfect oc is! Cause all I see here is a 50% man 50% cyborg 50% unicorn 50% unicycle 50% blog and 2% Ductape creature in the background. And if they created that then it's so amazing! (Sarcasm)

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 1:15 PM

You do realize it's a bad character blog mascot, right?

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 1:34 PM

So where the amazing character that every oc has to live up too?

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 3:02 PM

What were you on when you wrote that comment?

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 6:14 PM

It's hard to be in a conversation where I'm the only smart one in it.

AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 12:05 AM

IGN gave that game a bad review? Where is there Tripple A game?

That guy on rotten tomato gave a movie a bad review? I haven't seen him make any box office smashes.

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 2:58 PM

I will not deny that SOME of the things you pointed out were good points, but you're going about this review all the wrong way. If you want someone to improve their character, go to them and say "I have an idea you can try. Instead of having so-and-so do this, or look like that, try this other thing."

More often than not, the creator will look at your idea and say "Oh hey, I didn't think of that, that's a good idea" and go with it.

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 10:47 PM

Except the way these people are reacting, I don't think it matters if the guys at whyfags did that or not.

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 3:16 PM

Wow, just wow

You don't have other things to do, don't you?

Just like to make people feel bad?

Wow, you guys don't have life...

HollieNovember 21, 2013 at 2:07 AM

Well, Anon, it's either making them feel bad NOW, or being horribly embarrassed/traumatized ten years from now. Looking back on what you've done can do that to you. PERSONALLY I would prefer the wake up slap BEFOREHAND.

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 3:21 PM

Wow, I understand very much about the certain flaws of some ocs, but thats what makes them a flaring special snowflake. Look,all i want to say is that, you are probably the worst person i have ever met, i wish you were never born and your father used a flaring condom . But he probably did, only bought it from a drug dealer. Thank you very much for ruining my favorite artist work by spitting out your dumbcrap ideas. And i probably expect something about people hating on you, well there is a good flaring idea dipstick. And i know i might sound immature,but blast it. I love creepypasta.

AnonymousJanuary 2, 2014 at 6:56 PM

Wow, you buy condoms from drug dealers? Amazing!

- KiBoy

AnonymousDecember 20, 2015 at 9:40 AM

Bro. Don't get all butthurt because someone bashed your favorite artwork. It's a stupid reason to yell at people and it only makes you look like even more of an arsehole.

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 3:24 PM

Wow... you seriously have no life, do you? Do you just honestly spend all your time trying to make people feel like crap? I almost feel sorry for you.

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 9:32 AM

I also feel sorry for you. You seem to spend a lot of time writing all those comments...

RABiD~November 20, 2013 at 10:09 AM

Wow I feel so sorry for you.. You spend your time replying to the comment which actually makes sense. I for one don't waste my time, I just like to browse through comments trying to secretly judge people like you. :P

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 10:27 AM

Ohh, so secretly, yahh.

Take your sorry and shove it up your but, I don't even care.

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 3:24 PM

You guys need to stop screwing up the stories, the oc are wonderful, you arseholes just don’t have a sense of creativity, i love the ocs, the ocs are the best so far that i have read. You guys need to stop smashing up their oc by making fun of them! If anything you guys are the flaring pukes, all you do is bash people’s ideas. You know maybe if you didn’t bash peoples ideas maybe they wouldn’t have threatened to kill themselves. I think the reasons why you bash people’s ideas are because you don’t have a life, you guys are probably 40 year old arseholes, who live at home with their parents. I don’t even care if it says anon or not, you guys can go hex yourselves, also get your feet out of your mouths and say something nice for a change. So screw you guys, all you do is bring people down.

AnonymousDecember 27, 2013 at 11:36 AM

I really hope all that comment was sarcasm. If not, then... Well, there's not much hope for you. Having a guy grow a tail like * snaps * that is not creative, it's stupid. Making him live in a pond in Slenderman's woods isn't stupid, it's downward ridiculous and retarded.

People who threaten to kill themselves because their OC was bashed are stupid, they should grow up and understand that people won't kiss you butt all your life.

WhyFags don't bring people down, they show us people that creations have reached the bottom. Do you really think these can rival the likes of Slenderman or SCP 173, even though the latter one is not a creepypasta?

~ KiBoy

KariinSilvermoonNovember 19, 2013 at 3:32 PM

Dude you are such an ass. Just because you dont like something doesnt mean that you can just make fun of it because there are people out there that do. Those people spent their time to create something that they thought was cool and that other people love and just because you don't like creepypasta you get to take all that they worked for and burn it up. You are SUCH AN arsehole!! Surely you could have taken the time you used up to hate on these people and written something useful like speaking out against bullying (which is what you are doing btw) or calling attention to actual problems that go on in this day and age. I am apalled and disappointed in the fact that you have decided to take these peoples OC's and mock them and put labels on them. Do us all a favor and throw your computer away so we all dont have to look at all you hater crap ever again.

AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 2:15 AM

Oooooor you could just, you know, ignore this blog?

Why should they stop doing this just because you don't agree or like it?

AnonymousAugust 13, 2014 at 2:36 PM

See, you're making this point that people can do what you want, and telling the guys on this blog that they can't do what they want and talk about how flaring apecrap retarded most OC's are.

Which is it? Which will it be, people can do what they want, or not everyone is pampered and coddled all their life, and told that all of their ideas and work are perfect? Are only some people allowed to do what they want?

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 3:34 PM

You Whyfags writers are REALLY pathetic..Stop bashing other people's OCs and leave them alone. Most people had worked HARD on creating their OCs and they are proud of what they have done. But when you guys bash on them, you're putting them down and feel depressed. I don't know what the flare is wrong with you guys, but you really need to stop bashing on OCs and get a flaring life. If you guys chose to keep running this crappy blog, then you guys are flaring pathetic.

AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 2:05 AM

It takes no effort to create a Mary Sue OC.

AnonymousJanuary 2, 2014 at 6:58 PM

Besides, depression is not an illness. It's a state of being an artist.

- KiBoy

AnonymousAugust 13, 2014 at 2:46 PM

I'm going to start out on your side here. It takes some effort to make any sort of art, any sort of writing, and some of the artwork shown in OC's is good. This does not make them any less retarded in design, story, and personality.

I'm gonna say it now. I am a developing amateur artist, and I am depressed about ninety percent of the time, for various personal reason that I don't want to go into with strangers on the internet. Does this mean that it's bad to tell me that my art is bad, for a person to voice a negative opinion on it? The answer is no. In fact, I want to have more criticism on my work, so that I can get better. Because that's how people grow; they get criticism, figure out what's wrong with what they're doing, and get better. If one just huddles up in a hole of ignorance and praise, they will always push out the same crap, eat said crap, and later crap it out again, and that's not good. It means that you are not getting better, not realizing that you need to fix some issues with your design/writing/art.

Criticism is good.

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 3:56 PM

ok wtf do you really enjoy crashing peoples ideas cause all of these are good I thought you would do jane the killer( shes good but a copy ) or the stupid ones that are just copy of another creepypasta but apparently not! so you should stop this and leave people the flare alone!!!

AnonymousJanuary 2, 2014 at 6:59 PM

You think cursing will help you?

PS. These creepypasta OC's are crap.

- KiBoy

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 4:35 PM

OC's are OC's they can't be done right or wrong.. so this is just pointless what you did here these are great OC's

So hey little jerk go back to your meaningless life and go back to your constant non-life.

AnonymousJanuary 2, 2014 at 7:01 PM

Ooo, you mad bro? Mommy caught you '(misspelled unaccepted word)' and you want to express you anger? Poor you...

- KiBoy

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 4:46 PM

Why are you doing this? The creator has their own liberty to create a character the way however they want! So shut up and live them alone!!

AnonymousJanuary 12, 2015 at 1:42 PM

First of all, >live.

Second of all, your logic is broken. You're trying to prevent a blog from doing what the purpose of said blog actually is: Speaking of a "Original" Character's flaws by joking about it to encourage others to avoid giving their own Original Characters those flaws.

They havn't taken down any of their content and they never will, so stop White Knighting and deal with it.

- Mr. Eleven

EvilwerewolfNovember 19, 2013 at 5:50 PM

Wow. You're getting a bunch of hate in the comments. Anyways.You're actually kind of right when it comes to the originality of the creepypastas and their amount of 'creepy'. That is why they're called creepypastas, right? But, you probably should've been a little more sensitive with your words. Obviously not sugar coating it but not verbally bashing them on the ground several times. Thank you for the insight to these OC's that really aren't as good as I thought they were. I support you full way on these rants! And obviously you don't listen all of the hate people are giving you. Good job.

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 5:57 PM


AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 6:27 PM

one word, wench

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 7:37 PM

Thank you for the name calling, sweety. ^__^

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 11:20 PM

Sensitivity has never been these guys strong point.

I love how these people swarm you when you don't agree. How dare you not support there queen haha.

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 12:52 AM

their queen? excuse me? who are you to say that? do you even know them?

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 5:38 AM

And who are you?

Right now we are both anons.

Nobody knows us, you can say whatever you like, it's the reason most of us anons are insulting openly, you can't tell who is who. I may be anon 42 I may be Corgi moon pie I may be one of your friends knowing you posted here venting some anger.

Or I may be replying to myself here.

Don't ask stupid questions. The queen is metaphorical.

The hordes of anons, scrambling to slay the big mean dragon and save the damsel princess. Maybe if you all type hard enough what you are saying will pierce the dragons evil hide. And you can be the knight in shining armour. Telling everybody. "Do you see that anonymous comment? That was totally me!"

Or you can take it on the chin, and keep on walking. Pretend what you are saying here even matters, and go to bed thinking you made a difference.

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 5:57 PM

Wow you flaring maggots are you serious

I want to laugh at your face because your mind is so small and unimaginative

AnonymousJanuary 1, 2015 at 10:37 AM

Or you just want to be an arsehole.

AnonymousJanuary 12, 2015 at 1:44 PM

You probably just want to laugh because you're a dirtbag.

- Mr. Eleven

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 6:42 PM

are you for flaring real? people actually hate on others oc's like this... wow.

AnonymousJanuary 2, 2014 at 7:02 PM

It's constructive criticism, not hate. Besides, if you went with those to a professional critic, he would murder you on the spot for wasting his time.

- KiBoy

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 7:13 PM

I've just been Introduced to your blog today. Absolutely Hilarious.

I noticed this comment section was somewhat lacking in positive reinforcement.

What's that delightful saying? 'Haters gonna hate.'

I'll no doubt return for giggles at some future point.

Keep up the good work guys.

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 7:22 PM

yet again, another wench of the flock

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 7:24 PM

what are you, an ex or something?

RABiD~November 20, 2013 at 10:12 AM

Aaaand what are you? A monster?

Seriously use correct grammar when you TRY to insult someone, at LEAST.

I don't wanna give you a flaring English lesson, unless you want one.

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 10:31 AM


AnonymousJanuary 12, 2015 at 1:46 PM

And that's why the supporters of Whyfags don't give a blast. *puts on sunglasses*

- Mr. Eleven

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 7:22 PM

Are you flaring kidding me? Can't you just, well, leave people alone? Let them enjoy their OCs? Plus, these OCs aren't actually that bad. I'd like to see you make an OC. See how flaring generic and unimaginative it is. Why do you like treating other's creations like crap? If you think that it's,well, funny and will make you 'popular', well you are mistaken. I hate people like you, and I'm positive i'm not the only one. So leave the OCs alone. And you think these OCs are pukes? The real puke is you.

AnonymousJanuary 1, 2015 at 10:44 AM

First of all: Yes, they are that bad and you're wrong. Second: They did. More than once. Thirdly: Because the characters they review are just so stupid. Fourthly: It did get them popular, that's why you're here. Fifthly: This blog has a lot of haters, so stop being a hater. Sixdly(?): No. (7)thly: Wrong, they're pukes, no doubt. (8)thly: You're anonymous so you won't even receive this message.

- Mr. Eleven

Chica the final girlNovember 27, 2015 at 12:32 PM

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AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 8:05 PM

Okay, who the he|| are YOU to say if someone's OC is creepy or not. And on top of that, you ignorant son a wench, you hurt my friend's feelings! You can shove your snotty nastiness up your arsehole and leave people's OC the flare alone.

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 9:36 AM

You see, you don't have to be a master at character making to see whether a creepypasta character is actually creepy or not. IT'S PRETTY flarING OBVIOUS.

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 6:46 PM

Four words for you anon:

Eye of the beholder.

Everyone has a different view on the definition of creepy. So yeah, the writers of Whyfag are full of crap, acting like they're the ultimate authoritah on what is or isn't "creepy enough". (Though the first OC is a steaming pile of fail. I'll agree with them there).

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 8:58 PM

But it is still wrong to bash on someone's hard earn thought and time that they make into a OC. My friend is literally upset to the max.

AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 2:02 AM

Your friend needs to get a grip and move on. It's time to become an adult. If he/she is getting hung up on a REVIEW of an "original" character, they REALLY need to get a life outside of crying about it.

AnonymousJanuary 1, 2015 at 10:45 AM

Oh, you're friends with the creator of the character? Havn't seen that one before.

- Mr. Eleven

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 9:46 PM

Well,would like to see YOU guys writting cp oc storues if you want a good story. OCs are own characters,meaning the creator can do whatever they want and make them however they want to them. Do you know how much an specific oc creator you mentioned here is suffering because of you guys? Do you want her to really and truly turn into some creepypasta oc and go insane, and kill people for real?! Apperantely you do. As nd please, GET A LIFE instead of doing this. okemon and garnd theft auto? Pfft, please, you could be doing charity for the poor or getting a job instead of writing crap about how others express their creativity. AND If you say that CP OCs dont makesense, why the he|| do u even bother to read them? To me, you are the one who doesnt make sense. Have you watched the viral video called"Don't. Hug Me I'm scared"? Well i would say YOU need to watch it and analyze THAT deeply and get your brain together before you make the OC creators become like THAT. I know two of those OC creators, and trust me they are both very nice people that do what they do for fun, not because some no-life person like you told them to get rid of their own ideas. You, no-life person, have negative(-)1000000000000000 respect from me.

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 11:13 PM

Don't hug me I'm scared is about brainwashing children with tv shows, eating creativity etc everyone has seen the analysing of that video.

I see where you are coming from with that comment, but it is wrong.

You are seeing the blog as some sort of deep conspiracy to eat the minds and creativity of characters. No they are just reviewing characters.

Comparing whyfags to that is like comparing IGN or Rotten tomatoes to it. Just because they gave the game/movie a bad score/review doesn't mean they are trying to suck the life out of the developers.

DickieBNovember 20, 2013 at 12:38 AM

*clap* *clap* *clap* Thank you, you get it!

CorgiNovember 20, 2013 at 7:10 PM

I just wanted to say thanks, you probably don't care but you pointed out a lot of flaws that needed to be fixed and they will be and with every character. I get it, you are just being harsh but in the end you did give a lot of valid points.

I was stupid and you know, got butthurt, but none of that matters now! They are old characters, the stories were crap and a lot of it, didn't make any flaring sense. If you guys were to you know tone it down with insulting the artist maybe you would make a bigger impact on us as a whole and make us realize how stupid some of these characters really are.

This is the first time I was harshly reviewed so I didn't take it kindly, but thanks man. I will be changing if not all of their stories and designs to make it fit into the creepy pasta fandom. I am sorry for all of this stupid bullcrap people are spewing at you, it is partially my fault, there's no such thing as "bad publicity"

no hard feelings and thanks for the eye opening review,


AnonymousJanuary 1, 2015 at 10:50 AM

Your logic is broken beyond belief. First of all, they're critics. IT'S WHAT THEY'RE SUPPOSED TO DO. Also, they do have a life. People with "no life" have no friends, fail to interact with anyone other than themselfs and are just generally unable to do anything with others.

- Mr. Eleven

AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 11:21 PM

What ignorance.

You're nearly pitiful wasting time doing nothing.

It isn't doing anything, these "insults" you put up on your blog.

Some people take offence but they shouldn't, it keeps idiots like this running.

The way you insulted "Emos" is revolting and you should be ashamed. You get over half of your info wrong, and what you get 'right' is either uselessly hurtful or painfully triggering. Or it could be stupid stories of your life no one but you cares about.

Tisk tisk. I hope you know that you are a scourge on life and that you represent the bad parts of life and humanity.

Im not even trying to be hurtful this is the daunting truth.

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 4:21 AM

What's the difference between a dead baby and an emo?

The baby doesn't cry.

RABiD~November 20, 2013 at 10:15 AM

Wow. That's so offensive..

Just like the prats above which even flaring suggested suicide.

I lost hope in humanity, thanks :P

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 1:41 AM

Do all of us a favor Whyfags crew, delete this piece of crap you called a "blog" and go do something what you all are SUPPOSE to do. Just do us this one favor and we don't have to see your idiots bashing on people's OCs ever again.

AnonymousMay 29, 2014 at 4:37 AM

Are you speaking for the whole of mankind. because I personally love their blog and would hate to see it taken down. And what the he|| are they "supposed" to do? That's the stupidest thing I have ever heard. The only people who want this blog down are the morons who don't understand criticism. People who think everyone should be praised for everything they do even if it's crap, a little exercise for everyone who thinks this way. Imagine all the T.V. shows and movies that were so terrible, they basically disappeared from the face of the planet, now imagine if everyone 'said' those things were amazing. So now, instead of terrible ideas dying out and fading away, developers would see how well it's doing and make a similar movie... thus continuing the udder garbage that the last was. People who draw won't get better if you tell them everything they do is perfect because they won't see need for improvement. Criticism is good.

AnonymousJanuary 1, 2015 at 10:55 AM

What they're supposed to do? You mean critisizing bad fancharacters?

- Mr. Eleven

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 7:11 AM

Nice post, as usual, but where did all the maggots suddenly come from?

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 8:23 AM

Apparently the person who was reviewed is "Famous"

So, probably white knights.

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 1:35 PM

Jack fistus, why don't I get to be famous for dropping giant heaps of crap?

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 9:33 AM

I like how they assume you have no life when they have no idea who your are irl. I guess they dont like you kissing their queen bee's ass. Aww too bad. Lol this is the internet, expect stuff like this to come. You dont like it? GTFO! Or grow a back bone. Lol all these butthurt maggots.

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 9:48 AM

The one thing people don't understand is that they are not flarin' perfect. Having so many dumb freaks ready to smash anyone who said a bad thing about them doen't help either.

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 12:25 PM

If they WANT to have their OCs reviewed, they should have asked for it. But, they don't want them to be reviewed because sometimes they'll look back on it and remake them to make them look better.

But these guys chose to bash OCs for the fun of it and make the artists feel bad and quit the fandom they really love. You have no idea what's it like to have OCs get bashed. You have NO idea, Anon. :|

So, why don't you shut the flare up and stop praising these lowlife Whyfag writers? They have nothing better to do in their life and trying to be all popular. Idiot.

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 6:21 PM

Lmao in fact I do know what it's like to have my OC bashed :) Lol I looove how you all pretend to know who it is behind the screen when really you don't. If anything you're the idiot because you pretend to know things you don't. WOWIE ZOWIE did I hit a nerve sweetheart? Aww I must've because you're attacking me pretty hard.

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 9:34 AM

*not kissing

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 9:45 AM

This is a hamgod demn waist of time you made corgi want to change her OCs OR EVEN QUIT WHY THE HELL WOULD YOU EVEN flariNG DO THAT?! i know that you will find my other DA account with my OC myki but... he is not a CP so you can go suck a doorknob. you flaring maggot...

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 9:52 AM

"Waist of time" hahaha, lol.

Yeah, as they should do.

And why the he|| not?

No one gives a crap about you, really. You're not perfect nor the most important person here so please shoosh.

...Why do I get the feeling you just want your character reviewed here..?

There are literally only two posts about creepypasta characters, what the flare is wrong with you?

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 12:21 PM

Hey Anon, why don't you shut your pie hole? The artist put her heart and soul onto her OCs and the arseholes of WhyFags bashed her OCs for the he|| of it.

I know everyone else don't give a crap about you because you probably don't have any friends and you ain't worth crap. So, don't tell her that no one gives a crap about her because I am pretty sure that no one gives a rat's patuty about you, SWEETY. Don't even tell her she's not perfect nor important because I'm also pretty sure that you're NOT perfect (which is true) nor important.

So with all do respect, please buzz off and go (perverted suggestion deleted.) Thank you.

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 1:25 PM

That's a waste of heart and sould, then.

And that's flaring right. I don't have any friends. You wanna know why? Because blast if I want to have anything to do with those dumbarses. And I was talking about you, anon, not "her", whoever that is. Don't call me "sweety", you piece of trash. Call me a dumb flaring boring piece of crap, but don't flaring call me "sweety". And what. What will you do if I will call "her" a not perfect person, huh? All you know about me is that I'm an anon. Like many other anons on the Internet. "She" is NOT perfect and never will be. blast you.

Furry porn is disgusting and you are disgusting for even suggesting it. No respect for you. I worship the ground that awaits your corpse.

~Patheticarsehole Anon

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 3:32 PM

Hey retard? You got the WRONG Anon. So, I have no idea what the flare you're referring to me for, SWEETY.

I see why you have no friends because of your crappy attitude and you probably have no respect for anyone, but yourself.

AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 7:50 AM

Actually you can't see why I have no friends. And no. I have less respect for myself than for you. Because you're a piece of dirt. So am I. Now shut up.

RABiD~November 20, 2013 at 10:20 AM


Let me just start this..

Blast you.

Okay, now to the more IMPORTANT bits..

-You Suggested Suicide..

-You MOCKED people's OCs which they are PROUD of..

-You simply "look-mom-i-finally-dont-give-a-flare" this whole page..


On the last one you may say to yourself "Oh that wench doesn't know nuthin, why does she make a big deal out of the commenting section etc blahblahblahblah im flaring awesome" And then snort like a flaring pig..

I make a big deal not because I know the people and LOVE their OCs, they might not be perfect.. or even far from perfect, but at least let people enjoy doing what they want. It's a free world, there's homosexuals, transexuals, people who love animals more than humans sometimes.. People who believe in religions.. Seriously, just stop before you do some REAL damage to the humanity..


AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 10:29 AM

That made as much sense as me when I'm not drunk. Which means none.

AnonymousJanuary 12, 2015 at 2:01 PM

You actually start off with an insult. That's a sign you're irritated about it and hating on this blog. And even if you're trying to make a point, there is always someone to prove that you're wrong. It might be a free world, but some people have their limits.

- Mr. Eleven.

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 10:33 AM

Everyone go home, for flare's sake, you're not gonna change anything with your whining.

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 12:15 PM

Hey hey Anon? Shut up. No one cares about what you think. =_=

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 1:26 PM

Hey, hey, guess what? No one cares about what you think either.

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 3:27 PM

Of course not, because you idiots are careless and enjoy laughing at others. =_= So, shut the flare up.

AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 2:12 AM

and that means we never cease to be amused :D More fun for us!

AnonymousJanuary 1, 2015 at 11:02 AM

Well i care. I care about how accurate that comment was that you made, Anon A.

- Mr. Eleven

flarenuggetsNovember 20, 2013 at 2:07 PM


AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 3:04 PM

someone needs to go suck a thermometer for money, i thought that link was hilarious

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 3:00 PM

WHY THE flare CAN'T WE ALL JUST SHUT UP AND (suggestion deleted?)

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 3:04 PM


AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 3:05 PM

i need a bag of popcorn, and a video camera

AnonymousJanuary 12, 2015 at 2:04 PM

And a whip, maybe?

- Mr. Eleven

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 6:24 PM

I like how all see guys say you're bullies but they're acting worse than you all are. :D Lmao "OH MAH hamGAWD YOU'RE CYBER BULLIES!!! YOU flariNG mAGGOTS blast U!!!11" Lmao yeah and you're the cyber bullies.

CorgiNovember 20, 2013 at 7:04 PM

Seriously, this needs to flaring die! What the literal flare is wrong with all of you? Are you trying to prove a point? It's pointless, what's done is done, I flaring moved on.. and you know, WhyFags; thanks for stating all of the flaws my characters had..they were pretty old and they do need to be revamped; which I am now..so I'm thanking you guys (could have been a bit nicer, but you know people are arseholes now a days so I will just have to deal with it)

No crap I was hurt in the beginning, would you not be if you were in MY shoes? Saying I can't draw (because I'm actually not crazy good at realism and that's not going to change so that doesn't phase me!) These characters were rushed and poorly done..nor am I crazy about grammar because you know people have flaws and strong points (if you didn't know that well I question your logic)

I never wanted all of this stupid crap, and I am sure posting this I will end up getting hate replies but you know.. blast YOU I DON'T CARE WHAT KIND OF BULLcrap YOU HAVE TO THROW AT MY FACE, I ALREADY HAVE HAD ENOUGH!! SPARE YOUR BREATH, BECAUSE YOUR OPINION DOESN'T MATTER TO ME!! :)

So seriously thanks guys. I was stupid about it and you know, nobody is perfect so I am fixing my flaws on them as a whole and from now on.

HollieNovember 21, 2013 at 2:09 AM

Oh look! A mature person amidst the mindless rabble! <3

Good for you taking that attitude! Best of luck to you! :)

CorgiNovember 21, 2013 at 2:38 AM

Haha, I wasn't so accepting at first (mainly due to all the hate towards me and the bad mouthing) resulting in me being butthurt... but in the end they did have very valid points and finally getting over all that negativity and focusing on improving my characters to better not only myself but even the characters I create in the future!

so thank you, also for being one of the most considerate person on here...from my eyes are viewing all of this hate, Hamgod damn it really saddens me to see how low people get against one another..

but, it's time for me to retire from this site.

have a nice night.

AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 2:46 AM

The funny part is, they didn't hate on you, they hated on the characters, and I think that's something most of these anons who didn't even read the post miss.

The Character, is not the Person.

They may feel attached to them, but it would be the same as saying every time someone doesn't like the new starwars films, they are hating on George personally.

AnonymousNovember 20, 2013 at 8:12 PM


MachNovember 20, 2013 at 9:24 PM

Do you actually have bear hands? 'Cause you should probably get that checked with a doctor or something.

AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 12:54 AM

The way she types she most certainly does have actual paws...

HollieNovember 21, 2013 at 1:59 AM

I thought five year olds weren't allowed on the internet.

Some one needs a time out in the naughty corner until they can get over their little temper tantrum :)

AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 12:23 PM

They posted it here too.

AnonymousJanuary 12, 2015 at 2:11 PM

Hurhurhurhurhurhur (<-- That's actually how i laugh). I can't stop laughing about your bad grammar and abuse of Caps locks/Shift + Hold. Like, did you write this with your toes? And >bear hands. I don't even think that was a spelling error.

- Mr. Eleven

HollieNovember 21, 2013 at 1:52 AM

Dear sweet pasta of finn the human!

White knights, White knights EVERYWHERE.

Can you anon whiners even TRY to understand what's going on here? The point of this site is to poke fun at the stupid "original" ocs that people make. TRUST ME, when you look back on all the crap you made 10 years ago, you'll be MIGHTY embarrassed at how cliche, stupid and unrealistic it is. You guys need to stop crying, get a GRIP and perhaps take to mind some of the comments they make. Seriously, GROW UP.


Alla'ya'll anon commenters are going on about how the whyfags team doesn't have lives, and yet YOU people are here WHINING, WHITE-KNIGHTING and COMPLAINING about how butt hurt you or your friend are over some generally lax critque (compared to some stuff you'll get in the REAL WORLD, woooo!) Gee, sounds like a bunch of immature hypocrites to me.

Get a grip, and try to improve yourself, for the good of yourself AND EVERYONE ELSE.

AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 8:14 PM

...Hey Hollie?







HollieNovember 22, 2013 at 5:36 AM

Oh dear, did I hurt the widdle anon's feewings? :3 Take your own advice, you ninny.

AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 12:32 PM

Awww, looks like someone's trying to act tough :3

No one gives a rat's hiney what you think. If people hate this blog, they have the right to hate it. The arsehole lowlifes of Whyfags have no right to review people's OCs without even asking them in the first place. If they want their OCs to be reviewed, they would ASK for it. But, someday they would look back on their OC and would remake it to make them look better. So really, they don't need from arseholes like the Whyfags cast.

But, I guess you wouldn't understand it because you're too blind to see it. :)

Hollie, go hex yourself. If no, then I don't know what to tell ya sweetheart. :3

AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 3:20 PM

If they have no right to review, then you have no right to hate without asking if they want hate.

AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 3:30 PM

Wasn't talking to you~ ^_^

HollieNovember 22, 2013 at 3:36 PM

Anon 1- trying to act tough? A hypocrite now, are we? :3 At least I don't hide behind the "anon" sign like you do. If you're sooo tough and cool, why don't you crawl out behind your low life self and face things like an adult? ;)

Guess what? If you post it on the internet, everyone has the right to say something about it WHETHER you AGREE or NOT. You can't stop that because that's just how it works. I'd rather be blind than an ignorant white knight like you ;)

Also, no one gives a rat's derriere about what I think, huh? I think you do, since 1) you're replying 2) you're all up in my face about my opinion and 3) insulting me and acting like the generally immature whiners that populate the internet.

Grow a spine, and learn some manners. Until you do, stay off the internet and go back to kindergarten :)

Cheers, Sweetie ;)

HollieNovember 22, 2013 at 3:50 PM

Also, good response Anon 2 ;D

AnonymousJanuary 1, 2015 at 11:12 AM

Anan A. I fail to grasp your logic, as it is as broken as Meta Knight is powerful in Super Smash Bros.

- Mr. Eleven

AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 4:17 AM

Whoever did this is the real maggot

ShrekNovember 21, 2013 at 10:43 AM

Oh, Donkeh, looook at all these flaming comments on your fanceh typewriter! I kahn't even imagine why they're upset when the trooooth is shown. I hope they never show up in mah swamp, because I'll be sure tue show them tha troo horror that is ogre madness!


AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 1:51 PM

Are you high?

DonkeyNovember 22, 2013 at 3:15 PM

For flare sake shrek, I can't even escape you online, everywhere I go it's donkey this. AND DONKEY THAT!


BleedmanloverNovember 21, 2013 at 8:16 PM

Lick my boot

AnonymousJanuary 3, 2014 at 10:11 PM

But why?

AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 9:12 PM

The thing about these guys are that they're somehow right. Really, people if you're going to get mad at them because they're criticizing a creepy pasta OC. Don't even try. Sure you guys got mad for them making fun of others' OCs. But really. "CRITICIZING" in some critiques, you just HAD to be rude and point out things. The thing here, is that they're at least being humorous at some point. Also making the others' stories logical.

EVEN THIS HELPED ME WITH WRITING CREEPY PASTA STORIES. Funny thing. They at least helped me realize, that some crap people add aren't even flaring necessary. ALL YOU NEED IS A STORY. AND A flarING STORY BASED PICTURE. DONE. Also psychic powers and such. No. This helped me realize, that the stories I have written are crappy. I'll admit. And for the others' who got their OCs criticized. Just take the demn advice. DO NOT flarING TAKE IT SERIOUSLY. Yours may not have been complimented. Cause if you're just looking for compliments. Well.. you'll have to be thinking about better crap.. Good bye.

AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 10:36 PM

People on here lack grammar and proper spelling. I lost several IQ points just to read half of these comments. First of all, if you don't like this blog, then leave. How flaring hard is it to simply click away from this blog page and carry on with your merry ways?! Do you guys literally look up this blog, see their "de-grading" post of actually horrible OCs / CPs? Do you guys overlook the CONSTRUCTIVE (note: HELPFUL) criticism that they type at the end of every post?! Also, don't give me the "Oh, well, have you tried to make an OC / CP? I bet you haven't.", because I actually have made both, and they're well-made, since I have a difficult time making a joke Mary Sue. I just haven't made a full background story for them since I'm busy and I don't have enough ideas to make a full, well thought, good background story for each of them. I may be coming off as a perfect, righteous wench who thinks she's better than everyone else but really just needs to come off of her high and mighty horse. That's not true, though, as I'm only here to point out the oblivious facts that are no doubt on here. I don't care if I'm going to get yelled at across the internet, because that tells me you hate the truth that's been handed to you on a platinum flaring platter of the internet. Good night, everyone, and merry flaring early Thanksgiving! Have a fantastic holiday. (P.S. I love your work Whyfags!!!! PaperMoon16 to lazy to sign-in, signing out.)

AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 1:09 AM

Suck my fiction, Anon.

Suck their doorknobs if you love this crappy blog so much. :D Lololol

AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 5:41 AM

You should suck your own toes if it'll keep your mouth shut. Get off the blog if you don't like it :)

AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 12:28 PM

It doesn't really surprise me that dirtbags like you would enjoy crappy blogs like this :)

Kiss my site, Anon. :)

AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 12:36 PM

You should go hex yourself and get over the fact that just because you think this blog is crappy because it's about bad characters doesn't mean it it is nor that everyone who enjoys it is a dirtbag. That title belongs to me.


AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 3:29 PM

Like I said dirt, kiss my site ^_^

HollieNovember 22, 2013 at 3:38 PM

You're angry because we're not, Anon ;) Get over yourself.

AnonymousJanuary 12, 2015 at 2:16 PM

What do you guys have with smileys and genitalia? Like seriously, that's gross.

- Mr. Eleven

MachNovember 22, 2013 at 3:38 PM

The amount of sarcastic smileys in this comments section is astounding.

DannyGreenNovember 22, 2013 at 3:50 PM

Sure it is ;D

AnonymousNovember 22, 2013 at 3:53 PM

I'm amazed. This post has more comments than the "Kaite" review.

AnonymousJanuary 9, 2014 at 1:40 PM

Oh flame wars...

Aren't they just magnificent and enjoyable

(If you didn't get sarcasm, don't start the flame war)

AnonymousJanuary 19, 2014 at 7:47 PM

leave grace the he|| alone

AnonymousJanuary 1, 2015 at 11:19 AM


- Mr. Eleven

AnonymousDecember 27, 2015 at 12:04 AM

I see a white-knight.

AnonymousFebruary 14, 2014 at 4:17 PM

I absolutely found this funny! These ocs are just horrible. This blog actually helped me with my creepypastas. I wish that you guys would critize my friend's oc, Death. Death is actually worst than all these ocs combined.

AnonymousApril 14, 2014 at 2:35 PM

I just wonder how his father looks if sharpjaw is so hamgoddemn beautifull !! :)

AnonymousApril 18, 2014 at 3:25 PM

(excuse my english, it's not my native language)

Holy crap, tick off a half-arsed writer/"artist" and his/her teenage fans will come bawwing and screaming like an horde of retarded orcs.

These characters are crap. The idea of creepypasta, was to create scary stories; not writing the Twilight of horror fiction. Think of all the great monsters in horror. From Pennywise, to Hannibal Lecter, Nosteratu, Pyramid Head, the Cenobites or even Godzilla, Cthulhu and Cloverfield. All of them are supposed to evoke a feeling of dread, of feeling helpless and cornered by an unnatural intelligence or presence.

These OCs are not scary at all. They are power fantasies, stupid Mary Sues from teenager kids who think gore is the crap. Kids who feel bad because daddy doesn't let them get at tattoo, dress in black leather or do some heavy make-up. Stupid teenagers going through the "angst is kawaii" phase...

Again, look at that Jeff the Killer loser... he's pretty much Sasuke Uchiha looking like the unholy lovechild of Jack Skellington and L from Death Note.

Get this crap straight... Jeff the Killer is the worst thing that ever happened to creepypasta. You're a lousy writer or creator if your idea is going for a character that looks like your average anime recolor, behaves like the military squirrel from Happy Tree Friends, and has a retarded name related to violence or a mental condition. Jeez, kids... if you want to express your angst and mental problems killing something... go play a rogue in World of Warcraft, go full berserk in Call of Duty or something like that. But stop clogging the internet with unoriginal, Mary Sue projections of how you think you look like inside and how much do you want the world to suffer because "you're depressed and somehow, life has been unfair to you".

You're not the next Tim Burton, Stephen King or Takashi Miike.

You end up looking like idiots such as Rob Liefeld, that wench from Twilight, Nickolaus Pacione or those morons who make Crossed.

AnonymousApril 24, 2014 at 10:43 PM


Look at all the beautiful butt hurt~

I have a character I created in relation to creepypasta.

I know what is good about him, and I know all of the flaws in both story and design.

If it were reviewed poorly here, I may be disheartened at first, but I would not act like a fool and yell at the people who run this blog.

Actually, I would be glad that flaws that I had missed would have been relieved to me so I could improve my character/story.

As an artist you must learn to handle praise, hate, and constructive criticism.

I love constructive criticism.

People may put their heart and soul into a creation but that does not make it a master piece, that does not even necessarily mean it is any good at all.

I think everyone in the comment section needs to calm themselves and act a bit more maturely rather than yelling at everyone you speak with.

I found this blog today. At first I wasn't sure I would like it for the reasons most are offended.

However those who run the blog make valid points and are not simply bashing things.

If I used blogspot I would follow these guys, or whatever it is you do here.

Keep up the interesting work~

AnonymousMay 23, 2014 at 2:19 AM

You guys show some good points, BUT- a LOT of people put all the creepypastas together into one huge group. There are many people who have made comics, pictures, stories, everything. I think it's okay to put them all together into one, but hey, that's my opinion. I'm not going to try to argue with anyone about it. I also think it's okay to make a CP OC, but again, my opinion. Keep up the good work guys!

AnonymousMay 30, 2014 at 10:00 PM

WHOO! I made it through all the comments, and STILL have some popcorn left! Anyone want some? It's extra butter!

Pheonix Motherflaring WrightJuly 9, 2014 at 4:54 AM

Dude, holy crap, it took me an hour to read this whole thing. Of course I stopped and tried reading the comments but I gave up around the fifth white knight. Anyhow I was surprised to see there was not one redeemable OC, usually when I read these rants and cluster reviews you find at least one that gets a C, or a B. I've only been reading your blog recently but it's really been entertaining to say the least. So thanks, I guess

AnonymousOctober 27, 2014 at 8:47 AM

Holy flare! It's Phoenix megablasting Wright! I loved you in the video games!

nocturnalWallflowerAugust 18, 2014 at 12:33 PM

I... Just, wow. So much rage. I now love this blog for all eternity.

AnonymousDecember 29, 2014 at 8:58 PM

This made me laugh so hard I can't even

Can I send one of my OCs in to critique?

DannyGreenJanuary 2, 2015 at 2:50 AM

Sure. If it's actually worth critiquing

AnonymousJanuary 1, 2015 at 11:26 AM

Now it's just me wondering why everyone is so relieved to be at the bottom of the comment section. It wan't even tiring. Yes, it was long, it was repetitive and it was annoying. But i'm not relieved.

-Mr. Eleven

Stott InMadMarch 2, 2015 at 6:36 AM

All I see are characters that clearly have no understanding of what It means to be horrifying. No disrespect to the authors but how is it suppose to be scary. These characters have potential but their flaw = They live in the shadow of the classics. They can't survive on their own.

AnonymousMarch 10, 2015 at 9:43 AM

Whoa, so many hate comments. Why don't you just take this as a lesson to improve making CP OCs? It's a critique after all (a rather harsh one if you ask me, but still funny and hilarious). Well, at least these guys are being honest (rather than saying good thing in front and bad thing in back)

(Sorry for the bad english, not speaking english as native language)

AnonymousMarch 21, 2015 at 9:52 PM

I just love those butthurt "liv dem aloun!" comments.

AnonymousSeptember 19, 2015 at 2:41 PM

could i possibly see an example of a good creepypasta oc im not being sarcastic or anything but im trying to figure out how to make a good one im thinking mine a white haired black eyed necromancer that wears a black cloak and bandages on her mouth and neck is kinda bad cause maybe its to unoriginal? or somthing.

MachSeptember 23, 2015 at 9:34 PM

Alright so lemme give my brief essay on why Creepypasta fancharacters will never be good.

A horror (and by extension, creepypasta) villain is scary because you don't know what the flare they are, what they're capable of, or why they do their spooky stuff. A fancharacter is like the antithesis of that, because the story is always /about the character/ instead of actually being scary. Usually these stories fall more under "body horror" or "torture porn" which isn't actually scaring anyone, just making them uncomfortable and maybe causing them to lose their appetite.

Short version: A story about how a spooky kid had a spooky childhood and then died in some spooky woods in a spooky way only to be resurrected as a spooky demon? It isn't actually spooky.

UnknownNovember 26, 2015 at 8:42 PM

Can i request you to review my oc Maddie? I mean its terrible but i'm trying to learn how terrible my oc is.

Chica the final girlNovember 26, 2015 at 8:45 PM

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MachNovember 27, 2015 at 8:01 AM

I can see the things you linked, and I want to confirm that it is in fact terrible. There's nothing I can say about the character that Danny didn't already clearly elaborate on in the body of the above post.

In particular, incorporating as many Creepypastas into your OC as possible is a bad idea. In fact, as mentioned in this post, just don't incorporate ANY existing creepypastas into your OC. It's stupid.

Chica the final girlNovember 27, 2015 at 12:11 PM

Okay that's very helpful.

AnonymousJanuary 12, 2016 at 12:56 AM

Let me just say all of you who "Defend" these steaming piles of crap also known as Creepypasta Ocs. Your idiots, who should rethink your lives.

I love this, and want to see more. Keep up the amazing work. And to anybody who bashes my comment. buzz off.


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